Alsabeeai,Abdalla

Instructor Mohd Muzhafar Idrus (Mozac)

English Writing Gold A2

27 April 2010


Face to face communication is better than other types of communication


There are many different ways of communications, such as sending letters, emails, or making phone calls. However face to face communication still the most efficient way of communication between people. People agreed that face to face communication is the best type of communication. Face to face communication can eliminate misunderstanding immediately.


In face to face communication people can get direct response from the other party. When we talk with our friends, we can get feedback immediately from their verbal response, body language and facial expressions. Based on these responses, we can know what’s the next step to take, such as how to carry on the conversation, and the direction of finish the conversation if necessary. Sometimes, speaking words and body languages may not mean the same thing. Although we can hear words from a telephone conversation from our friends but we do not always know if they really mean it . This is also true in criminal inspections. Police inspectors can judge whether the suspect is telling the truth through his or her body languages, therefore get new clues and solve a criminal case more quickly. Thus face to face communication is more perceptible and can help us understand a speaker’s true feeling better than other ways of communication.


Face to face communication is the most helpful way to express ourselves. In communication it is just not enough for us to say the words; we need eye contact, body language to express our feelings .Sometimes we are so happy or angry that we are out of words. When you talk face to face, you communicate with more than words .You communicate with your eyes and your hands. You communicate with your whole body . People can sense than you really want to communicate with them. This energy bonds people together. Your relationship with a person can grow much stronger when you communicate in person.


At these times, there is nothing more efficient to express our happiness or anger than a big hug or turn our face to another side .When we are a tourist in a foreign country, language is not always enough, and gesticulations might help us get understood more quickly. We can order in a restaurant by simply pointing our fingers to the menu when we do not know how to pronounce an item exactly.

Face to face communication is indispensable in situation such as a relationship. Lovers need body contact such as a hug, a kiss and more ,which cannot be done in letter or emails. Although lovers can use letters or emails to communicate, being apart for a long time is definitely not beneficial to a relationship.


In summary ,if you want to establish a relationship with another human being .I would have to agree that face to face communication is the best way is talking face to face . When you communicate directly, you can avoid misunderstandings that may occur in writing .You can communicate on levels other than just words and you can spend more time doing it .


Work cited:

N.P"Argumentative Essay."N.P.http//bestessay.com/argumentative_essay/php.html.
N.P"Writing an Essay."N.P.http/goodessay/argumentative _essay/php.html

Second draft
Argumentative Essay

There are many different ways of communications, such as sending letters, emails, or making phone calls. However face to face communication still the most efficient way of communication between people. People agreed that face to face communication is the best type of communication. Face to face communication can eliminate misunderstanding immediately.

In face to face communication people can get direct response from the other party. When we talk with our friends, we can get feedback immediately from their verbal response, body language and facial expressions. Based on these responses, we can know what’s the next step to take, such as how to carry on the conversation, and the direction of finish the conversation if necessary. Sometimes, speaking words and body languages may not mean the same thing. Although we can hear words from a telephone conversation from our friends but we do not always know if they really mean it . This is also true in criminal inspections. Police inspectors can judge whether the suspect is telling the truth through his or her body languages, therefore get new clues and solve a criminal case more quickly. Thus face to face communication is more perceptible and can help us understand a speaker’s true feeling better than other ways of communication.
Face to face communication is the most helpful way to express ourselves. In communication it is just not enough for us to say the words; we need eye contact, body language to express our feelings .Sometimes we are so happy or angry that we are out of words. When you talk face to face, you communicate with more than words .You communicate with your eyes and your hands. You communicate with your whole body . People can sense than you really want to communicate with them. This energy bonds people together. Your relationship with a person can grow much stronger when you communicate in person.
At these times, there is nothing more efficient to express our happiness or anger than a big hug or turn our face to another side .When we are a tourist in a foreign country, language is not always enough, and gesticulations might help us get understood more quickly. We can order in a restaurant by simply pointing our fingers to the menu when we do not know how to pronounce an item exactly.
Finally, face to face communication is indispensable in situation such as a relationship. Lovers need body contact such as a hug, a kiss and more ,which cannot be done in letter or emails. Although lovers can use letters or emails to communicate, being apart for a long time is definitely not beneficial to a relationship.

In summary ,if you want to establish a relationship with another human being .I would have to agree that face to face communication is the best way is talking face to face . When you communicate directly, you can avoid misunderstandings that may occur in writing .You can communicate on levels other than just words and you can spend more time doing it .

Out line
Argumentative essay

I.Introduction :

There are many different ways of communications, such as sending letters, emails, or making phone calls. However face to face communication still the most efficient way of communication between people.

II.Body:

Face to face communication is the most helpful way to express ourselves. In communication it is just not enough for us to say the words; we need eye contact, body language to express our feelings .Sometimes we are so happy or angry that we are out of words. When you talk face to face, you communicate with more than words .You communicate with your eyes and your hands.

At these times, there is nothing more efficient to express our happiness or anger than a big hug or turn our face to another side .When we are a tourist in a foreign country, language is not always enough, and gesticulations might help us get understood more quickly.

face to face communication is indispensable in situation such as a relationship. Lovers need body contact such as a hug, a kiss and more ,which cannot be done in letter or emails. Although lovers can use letters or emails to communicate, being apart for a long time is definitely not beneficial to a relationship.

III.Summary:

I would have to agree that face to face communication is the best way is talking face to face.

In my openion, dealty penetly is not a good way , because everybody has the right to live .More over it is not good for people

Alsabeeai,Abdalla B.

Professor Mohd Muzhafar Idrus

Gold A2 Writing

17 April 2010

Technology and its effect on society.

Technology is continusuosily changing with the time, and it is changing people as well.These changes are going to seperate and destroy people as long as people life .Unless people are well informed of the result.As technology has developed greatly . It solved many serious troubles , and made alot of actions possible that people could not even thought at the beginning of the life. But in the other side when solving problems , technology mostly oftn creates more new problems , and sometimes these new problems may threaten people's life and effect on the society.

Before the invention of the television and the radio ,peolpe had ways of having fun togather every day . Many ways of fun have almost disappeared in the modern world . At that days , people used to talk and listen to each other ,plaied games togather , and they would even meet every day and stayed along time togather doing things and having fun with each other . But now a days , most people feel lost without these devices, and become more unsocial by ingoring many meeting with others ,because on interasted programs on the channels. Even in the same family , people barely know each other.

The increase in these modern forms of communication , mobile phones and computers, have actually decreased other forms of human interaction . People spend more time on the Internet , or whit thier text messages , or playing gamed on the computers .Effect of exposure to the frquencies of waves or radiation at people's body or health bring many problems like continuous headache and cancer in their blood .Also many people are actually spending less time developing thier social skills while they may be vastly improving their computer skills . Spending far less time actually interactign with the people around them . It has become easier for people to cocoon themselves in their homes and neclect doing exercises and playing sports .

Affection of technology on the education . The affection of technology in field of study in these days make comprehension problems .Students become dependant onthe thecnology to learn and understand ,they will learn or gain an inappreciable subjects or an un successful generation .Calculators , as we know now a days many commercial companies created wide diffirnt of that tool in many fields of materials .People will find it easy to solve mathematics and statics problems with using the calculators and that effects on the ability of using their minds in the future .

In breif,technology will be a big problem if people do not use it advantage in the right way and that may lead to create more harmful problems at people life and the society .

work cited

Graves,James."Technology and its effect in people and the society.".N.P. http://home,xnet.com/-ansible/graves.hists.html.

N.P."Technology in Education ." N.P. http://newhorizon.org/strategies/technology/front-tech.html.

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second draft

Technology and its effect on society .

Technology is continuously changing with the time, and it is changing people as well.These changes are going to deperate and destroy people as long as people live.Unless people are well informed of the result . As technology has developed greatly, it solved many troubles, and made alot of action poosible that people could not even imagine at the beginning of people life.But int hte other hand when soling problems , technology mostly often creates more new problems and somethimes these new problems may threaten people life and effect on the society.

Before the invention of the television and the radio . people had ways of having fun togather every day .Many ways of fun have almost disappeared in the modern world.At that days, people used to talk to each other, play games togather , and they would even meet every day and stayed along time togather doing things and having fun with each other . But now adays. most people feel alost without the television , mobile phones , and computers . Even in the same family ,people barely know each other because of that develope of the technology.

The increase in these modern forms of communication has actually decreased other forms of human interaction.As people spend more time on the internet, or with thier messaging ,or playing games on computers .they are spending far less time actually interacting with the people around them. It has become more easier for people to cocoon themselves in thier homes ,and never see anyone.Also many people are actually squendering less time developing thier social skills while they may be vastly improving their computer skills.

Affection of technology on the education . This is other side ao affetion .The affection of the technology in field of study in these days make comprehension problems.For example ,students will become dependant on the technology to learn and understand the subjects , they will learn or gain an inappreciate subjects or untrusted information from electronis books od from the web sites,that leads to bring up an unsuccessful generation . Calculators, as we know many commercial companies created a wide diffirent of that tools in many materials ,students will find it easy to solve mathematics and statics problems with using the calculator and that effects on the ability of using their minds.

In brief, technology will be used in many ways of life that may create more harmful problems at people life and the society.

Out lines
Technology and its effect on on human freedom and happieness in society

Introduction
As technology devaloping day after day ,it gives more sloution in our life even more make it easy to people to deal with all actions .but these development creates more new problems to people and that may lead to create a new difficult life for them

The effect of television and the radio on sociality of people .
Effection of modern communication like internet and mobile phones on the health of people.
Effection of the technology on the eduction .

Conclusion

To sum up ,in addition to the all benefits of moderm technology for people, technology has an affection on thier life and thses may lead to create a new problems.

Instructor Mohd Muzhafa Idrus (Mozac)
English Gold A2
6 April 2010

Living away from home and living at home

Living far away from home and living at home. Generally speaking, this is really an interesting subject for people who has no idea about this subject. When someone wants to talk or write about this subject should consider or cover all advantages and the disadvantages of this subject to make it more clear and exciting for the reader. Starting from the biggest thing like the money and budget to the smallest thing as in house work like cleaning, washing and cooking. According to my knowledge living out home is better for people and gives anew feeling of independent.

There are a lot of advantages that might be gained when someone lives far away from his/her home town. For instant; having an experience about the life and cope with all kind of problems without side help or encouragement ,moreover having the ability to depend on him/herself without leaning on someone else. That makes him/her more reliable by having all that wisdom that he gained and has a durable life .Here if I gave an assumption about students who prefer to study outside their home town. The reason why they prefer that is to have a change in their life and having a good knowledge about it, in addition to all that they want to know more about the world through discovering the areas while they are on a trip. What is the most interesting thing they gained while they are on their new environment or city is meeting a new people from all sides of the world.

Every positive side has negative side. for example student who prefer to live or study outside of his/her in a different environment from their original environment got home sick quickly and having no desire to be alone and this may effect on the their mind and their duty .they may face problems with other students if they live in a campus because everybody has a different nature .What more I would like to concern about in the this side is when people live alone have more responsibilities. They need to wash their clothes, buy their food, and experience more personal responsibility brought by a new statue of independent and all of that depend on the desirability to do all that staff. Trying to live and adapt to a variety of lifestyles require maturity.

In my opinion, living at a new environment gives people more and more about the life and its problem and let them having more new senses that they couldn’t gain at home by dealing with different people from all sides . Living far away from home can teach us the invaluable lesson of living in harmony with other people.


“Writing an essay.” Cheathouse.n.p, 4 December 2003 .Web.6 April 2010.

Second draft
Living far away from home and living at home. This is really an interesting subject for people who has no idea about this subject. When someone wants to talk or write about this subject should consider or cover all advantages and the disadvantages of this subject to make it more clear and exciting for the reader. Starting from the biggest thing like the money and budget to the smallest thing as in house work like cleaning, washing and cooking. According to my knowledge living out home is better for people .
There are a lot of advantages that might be gained when someone lives far away from his/her home town. For instant; having an experience about the life and cope with all kind of problems without side help ,moreover having the ability to depend on him/herself without leaning on someone else. That makes him/her more reliable by having all that wisdom that he gained and has a durable life .Here if I gave an assumption about students who prefer to study outside their home town. The reason why they prefer that is to have a change in their life and having a good knowledge about it, in addition to all that they want to know more about the world through discovering the areas while they are on a trip. What is the most interesting thing they gained while they are on their new environment or city is meeting a new people from all sides of the world.

Every positive side has negative side. for example student who prefer to live or study outside of his/her in a different environment from their original environment got home sick quickly and having no desire to be alone and this may effect on the their mind and their duty .they may face problems with other students if they live in a campus because everybody has a different nature .What more I would like to concern about in the this side is when people live alone have more responsibilities. They need to wash their clothes, buy their food, and experience more personal responsibility brought by a new statue of independent and all of that depend on the desirability to do all that staff. As a result all that points of view should be considered to have a good knowledge of this subject.

In my opinion, living at a new environment gives people more and more about the life and its problem and let them having more new senses that they couldn’t gain at home by dealing with different people from all sides .

First draft
Free writing :
Living far away from home and living at home . this is really an interesting subject for people who has no idea about this subject . when someone wants to talk or write about this subject should consider or cover all advantages and the disadvantages of this subject to make it more clear and exicting for the reader, starting from the biggest thing like the money and budget to the smallest thing as in house work like cleaning, washing and cooking . For instant ; one of the advantages that might be gained when someone lives far away from his/her family house is having an experience about the life and cope with all kind of problems without side help ,moreover having the ability to depend on him/herself without leaning on someone else. That makes him/her more reliable by having all that wisdom that he gained and has a durable life . most students prefer to study out side their home town and the reason why they prefer that is to have a change in their life and having what I have mentioned before , in addition to all that they want to know more about the world through discovering the areas while they are on a trip . what is the most interesting thing they gaind while they are on their new environment or city is meeting a new people from all sides of the world . every positive side has negative side . for example student who prefer to live or study out side of his/her in a different environment from the origin got home sick and having no desire to be alone and this may effect on the their mindand may face problems with other students if they live in a campus .what more I would like to add to the disadvantages is when people live alone have more responsibilities. They need to wash their clothes, buy their food, and experience more personal responsibility brought by a new statue of independent and all of that depend on the desirability to do all that staff. As a result all that points of view should be considered to have a good knowledge of this subject .

Out lines

Living away from home and living at home

Introduction :
Many different opinions about living away from family and living at home .Many people prefer to be far away from home in case of their opportunity in the life , other see the opposite .

Thesis statement :
In spite of the fact that living away from home has some disadvantages, it has its advantages at the same time .

Body:
Advantages;
- Having an experience about other cultures .
- Having an opportunity to gain self-confident.
Disadvantages:
- Having difficulty to cope with living abroad .
- Having a difficulty to cope loneliness.


Conclusion :
As a conclusion , people ,who is still single, should travel more to see and have a good experience about the life , because the life needs a strong experience to deal with .

Home work page 117-118

Practice 2:
A:
1-The United states operation under a two party system ,just like Great British .
2-Not only the British parliament has two separate houses,the house of commons and the house of lords ,but also the United states congress has the two separate houses,the senate and the house of representative .
3-The U.S house of represantative is similar to the British house of commosn and the U.S senate is similar to the British of lords.
4-like the member of the U.s house of representative are elected by district the members of the British houses of commons are elected by district.
5-The methods of choosing cabinet members in the U.S are the same in Great Britain.
6-In Great Britain the prime minister appoints the cabinet and the U.S president appoints the cabinet.
7-like the British monarch has the right to veto any law passed by Parliament, the U.S president has the right to veto any law passed by congress.


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B:
1-Mozac's and Abdalla's Hobbeis are the same .
2-Like the service they use in the trains , they use in the buses.
3- Mozac and Abdalla are not americans .
4-Mozac's hobbies like Abdalla's hobbies.
5-Writing class at the lab is not the same as in classroom.

Home work page 140

Practice 5
Summary one :
The world faces a future of bilingual speakers . English no more seen as the first language . Many english consults obvoius that . Despite the fact that english language was used as a first language in many field of the life , alot of field now adays used ther clandestine language . As they said many experts english language will be less important than the majority of people prefer (Schmid).



summary 2 :
It is everywhere , not because it is very simple .by 2050, experts made a forcast among the people all over the world and they realised that half of the world will be more or less proficient in it .English language now is concise widely spoken in many locations that alot of versions have been increasing .some words are so clendatine that even native speakers have problem in distinguishing each other if one version is omitted will present difficult enough to understand.

home work

Paraphrase no 1 page 132.
An article in Space Science Megazine reports that another basic issue to be concerned is living along period of time in isolated situation may lead to mental problems for astronauts(Clinton 18).

Paraphrase number 2:
An article in Space Sience Magazine reports that eventually,It is hard for every body to cope with sitiuations .For example , astronauts cabine is limited , crowded and full of radioactive devices (Clinton 18).

Paraphrase number 3:
A letter from the Time magazine reports that our home live development is important than spending time and money on going to Mars. alot of thing we should improve in the Earth like working to find a solution of dangerous illness and struggling against the poverty and solving food problems (Brunish 9 ).

Paraphrase number 4 page 134:
An artice of a magazine reports that the velocity rate to reach Mars is evrything and not only can be smach . the biggest trouble is that it led to death becouse of the radiation and its explotion in far space . unpresent of Earth magnetic boundary lets astrounauts far more axposes to deadly cosmic power than they are in a road to the moon (Kluger 48).

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