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Living far away from home and living at home. This is really an interesting subject for people who has no idea about this subject. When someone wants to talk or write about this subject should consider or cover all advantages and the disadvantages of this subject to make it more clear and exciting for the reader. Starting from the biggest thing like the money and budget to the smallest thing as in house work like cleaning, washing and cooking. According to my knowledge living out home is better for people .
There are a lot of advantages that might be gained when someone lives far away from his/her home town. For instant; having an experience about the life and cope with all kind of problems without side help ,moreover having the ability to depend on him/herself without leaning on someone else. That makes him/her more reliable by having all that wisdom that he gained and has a durable life .Here if I gave an assumption about students who prefer to study outside their home town. The reason why they prefer that is to have a change in their life and having a good knowledge about it, in addition to all that they want to know more about the world through discovering the areas while they are on a trip. What is the most interesting thing they gained while they are on their new environment or city is meeting a new people from all sides of the world.
Every positive side has negative side. for example student who prefer to live or study outside of his/her in a different environment from their original environment got home sick quickly and having no desire to be alone and this may effect on the their mind and their duty .they may face problems with other students if they live in a campus because everybody has a different nature .What more I would like to concern about in the this side is when people live alone have more responsibilities. They need to wash their clothes, buy their food, and experience more personal responsibility brought by a new statue of independent and all of that depend on the desirability to do all that staff. As a result all that points of view should be considered to have a good knowledge of this subject.
In my opinion, living at a new environment gives people more and more about the life and its problem and let them having more new senses that they couldn’t gain at home by dealing with different people from all sides .
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14 years ago
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